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    Apartment

    “Apartment..”

    A gathering of gloom. Tragedy paints in neutral stained finish
    Apathy: a room arranged in loosely staged interests
    Estranged. Vintage.
    decors worth the penny for her thought. Strange, ain’t it?
    It rained recently. The air still thick from sudden heavy load
    Tangential plots; aimless walk under the silver full moon
    Perhaps it was a little too late for “too soon”
    An endless debate, is it not? I was gone by noon
    Not long after, I’d soon miss imparted kisses
    How she’d randomly started shit.
    Showing me the meaning of what apart meant

    Dust settles like verdicts on unspoken crimes,
    Each silence a sentence served in toneless times.
    The couch sags with stories — some hers, some mine,
    All wrapped in linen too threadbare to define.
    She moved like a metaphor I couldn’t unpack,
    A thrifted soul with trauma stitched to her back.
    We’d orbit in the black like planets out of sync,
    Saying everything except what we actually think.
    In voice so very tired to feel anything.

    -Scarz49




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    Re: Apartment

    Dagel think he slick

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    Re: Apartment

    I don't know if it's dagel but its not rap.

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    >it’s not rap

    so… Dagel?

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    Re: Apartment

    I know about 6 writers from here that do this style because they believe that this poetic rhyme scheme is divine itself. Eventually who ever this is will reach AJ's insanity I would assume.

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    Re: Apartment

    This is for writing lyrics
    There's Poem section
    One of staff should move this Poet area

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