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    Rape is fun.. I mean rap. Nicktorious's Avatar
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    Nicktorious - Just Rap

    Hey guys, just dropped a new song called "Just Rap" last night off of my upcoming untitled album



    and for those who don't have SoundCloud here's a YouTube link

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hoC43TwPMQg&t=37s


    Lyrics

    V1

    Did you miss me?
    I been gone for a minute now I'm back to make history
    you better think twice before you diss me
    bitch please, end up on your knees bleeding
    and barely breathing
    you fuck around and get your life took
    all I need is one good right hook
    I'll knock you out then I dip, I be steppin' over
    you little mumble rappin faggots
    cuz when I'm not all up in your face you be jaw jackin
    and I'll be God damned if I let a rainbow hair bitch
    from this new era make a fool outta Nick
    and I don't care who you with, I'm well prepared bitch
    you step up to the plate an I'ma knock you out the park
    we can do this in the day or rumble after dark
    I'm the hardest new artist that'll leave you departed
    so confused when I start it I have you looking like "who farted?"

    V2

    And I don't need a hook
    I do this how I please, fuck living by a book
    cuz I do what I wanna
    move when I wanna
    I screw who I wanna
    I smoke marijauna
    I don't give a fuck about alotta, de nada
    and I don't really gotta make sense, I only make dollars
    now holla back, it feels like rap is my super power
    to over power you little motherfuckin' cowards
    I take my mask off then I jack off
    blast off on you bitches I don't want riches
    I just want recognition because I love this shit
    and you don't like it you can suck my dick, fuck it


    who farted?
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    Re: Nicktorious - Just Rap

    i think it was you who farted..
    Honestly the instrumental is by far the highlight of this song.
    not hating but you have a long way to go. I cant tell if this is you trying or the point of the song is for you to not try? alot of cheesy lines in here man. I'd suggest sharing another song as your first song on a site but hey wtf do i know..
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    Rape is fun.. I mean rap. Nicktorious's Avatar
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    Re: Nicktorious - Just Rap

    I've dropped on this site before ( my last drop http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vel&highlight= )

    but thanks for the feedback
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    Re: Nicktorious - Just Rap

    Quote Originally Posted by LEWSHiS View Post
    i think it was you who farted..
    Honestly the instrumental is by far the highlight of this song.
    not hating but you have a long way to go. I cant tell if this is you trying or the point of the song is for you to not try? alot of cheesy lines in here man. I'd suggest sharing another song as your first song on a site but hey wtf do i know..
    Lol, what? Dude, uh, who do you think YOU are, exactly, to be talking like that to anyone? Just because you bombard every forum continually with songs on beats you don't own doesn't make you better than ANYONE. Please share a link of YOUR very first song (I don't have a link to mine but IS on this website somewhere. Hey, since you know so much right?). You got 107 subscribers in a thriving hip hop market and average 70 views. Settle down. Lol.

    Bottom line: This wasn't even bad man. I've heard WAY worse, and I was way worse than when I started. Never mind people trying to be tough guys or feel the need to bring you and others down to make themselves feel better. THEY are the weak ones, and more often than not they're far more insecure about their own game. This was a solid effort, with some obvious improvement needed. But we are ALL improving all the time, no matter what level we are at.

    The lyrics - you're trying, and that's what matters. Continue to get better with every song. I think your subject matter is going to make people shrug you off. So it really depends on how seriously YOU wanted to be taken. Always try to think of the words you are saying and HOW they relate to the people you are trying to reach.

    The flow - It's dying to be found. Just keep focusing on that snare drum and it will come man. Listen and study the way other emcees ride on the snare. There's a lot of passion there. You remind me of some homies of mine. Just keep it up and have fun man.

    The beat - Yeah, the beat was pretty dope. Lol good choice.

    Delivery - Maybe one of your strongest points. A lot of passion. The quality was clean. It's always nice to read along with the lyrics man.

    Keep it the fuck up! And Lewshis is actually pretty dope. If you ignore and forgive him for his egotistical comment, go check out his music and he's got some good examples of good flow, lyrics, and delivery. I will make him collaborate with you if he ever begs for a collab with me again lol.



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