no...no.. NO!...Slayer! dont force me to relive this trash...
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no...no.. NO!...Slayer! dont force me to relive this trash...
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Fucking what?Quote:
Originally Posted by Slayerr.
Thanks for the kind words Shaman and Slayerr, I appreciate you.
Jack, I feel you on the line count restrictions. I didn’t like it at first but it’s grown on me. A longer battle would be neat though. I’m glad you suggested going 24.
Well ok, I can work with that better now you’ve elaborated on ‘unconventional’. I don’t mind criticism, it’s just that I spent quite a lot of effort trying to be positive and polite when voting on your battles so your bluntness seemed like a bitter irony.Quote:
Originally Posted by mal diction
Pretty sure my rhymes are fine, maybe your issue is that it’s written for my Southwestern English accent. Bag and my oblong-headed compatriot Slayerr haven’t criticised it so I figure it’s ok.
100% valid if my writing structure doesn’t appeal to you. To be fair I’d probably use more line breaks if we weren’t writing to a line-count limit. That might make it seem a little less wordy. Or not.
We’re all counting Mal’s vote as -1. Whoever he votes for loses a point.Quote:
Originally Posted by TheShaman
He doesn’t know about it, don’t tell him.
Bad breakup was it? You shouldn't have been messing around with the men like that, it's all your fault.Quote:
Originally Posted by Virbius
lol @ virb for assuming bag or I understand and talk like u gurt lush spastic
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Originally Posted by Virbius
less than 15 syllables a line is not rocket science ... i'm not a bias voter.. i'd vote for you if the verse is appealing ... i'm not being difficult but if you cant type less than 15 syllables ... a line ... then you deserve whatever outcome is birthed
when this battle is done ill do a very in depth anal-assist of both verses virbius and jack. no bias, no "how i feel" in the moment but real deal breakdowns and dick sucking... whoa i mean no dick sucking... well maybe just a little ayooooooo wtf >.>
You're welcome to write 1000+ lines of mostly 1-2 letter words.Quote:
Originally Posted by Virbius
al
ri
gh
t,
we
bou
tta
kee
pit
unc
on
ven
ti
ona
lly
co
nv
ent
io
nal
LOL @Slayerr. I just imagine Unanymous accent for virb I think it's near enough. Americans got this shit so easy due to the accent, fully envious, if you check an interview with someone with a strong barnsley accent or watch some charlie chuck, that shit isn't meant for rap haha
Ay - I'm done with my verses for ASAP btw, we're looking at a "top 100 grime tracks of 2025"playlist spot at the end of the year
hahaha @FaQEyeReddit
well .. to be fair, there IS "google pronunciation" if you need to see how it's pronounced ... simply go to google and type 'pronounce' and the word you're trying to rhyme.. otherwise... it's just being lazy...Quote:
Originally Posted by Bag Mandela
i mean it's 2025 and being on this site means you have internet access .. so there are no excuses
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not to long ago we had a discussion about how to pronounce Phalanx .. being from the south, I pronounced Phal to rhyme with "file"// and @Slayerr got all kinds of pissed at me... this is no different ...
lol @mal diction , I've never had to look up rhymes from verses here: You can figure out that it rhymes either way. Especially when it's multis. The only thing ever from Virb that didn't compute with me was the Jake Paul/Pool stuff. But that DOES rhyme in a Scottish accent, though. So he could have done a Scottish act out and made it work. Everything goes.. Especially in text. I even faked a British accent for a word to rhyme on here once, lol. Yeah, it's a sin, but not cardinal.
@Bag Mandela pardon the ignorance, but what's this ASAP stuff? ASAP Rocky isn't grime =]
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lol @mal diction , I've never had to look up rhymes from verses here: You can figure out that it rhymes either way. Especially when it's multis. The only thing ever from Virb that didn't compute with me was the Jake Paul/Pool stuff. But that DOES rhyme in a Scottish accent, though. So he could have done a Scottish act out and made it work. Everything goes.. Especially in text. I even faked a British accent for a word to rhyme on here once, lol. Yeah, it's a sin, but not cardinal.
@Bag Mandela pardon the ignorance, but what's this ASAP stuff? ASAP Rocky isn't grime =]
Wh..what? Mal, you’re aware that there are different accents with different ways of pronouncing things, right? There isn’t one correct version you can google.
Your 15 syllable thing is totally arbitrary. Nothing objectively wrong with longer lines, as demonstrated by the fact that I’ve been using them for the entire tourney and won a lot of battles. Maybe you should start writing longer lines too, that way you might be able to fit some actual content and wordplay into them eh?