WK3: Slayerr. vs Bag Mandela (Slay wins)

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WK3

Punches due: Tuesday 2nd September

Voting ends: Friday 5th September

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@Slayerr.

Ur a raging homo n ur standards are so low imagine being my ONLY stan
In ransom u sent me so much cash for my craft like another simp subbed to my only fans

John Armfield shit when I flay this minion,
They'll see one white guy... n-Slay-vermillion

Both creative with rhyming
I like slayer punchline more
Vote Slay

V/ Bag

Slayerr, I don't really get it, mate. You're calling Bag a homo, but you're the one stating you have an OnlyFans? Also, the only stan set up - maybe I'm missing a personal here or something, or self-deprecation is the new thing?

Bag, creative name flip, although it felt the set-up was meh. The idea hit harder than Slayerr's punch.

slayer is very simple and it flows meh to me, but the punch is decent enough

bags the wp is forced no? enslave a million right? doesn't work, and it's not close imo.. lmk if im wrong but it just doesn't do it for me, seems u wrote this in 2min lol

v/ slayer for consistency

Wasn't really feeling the heat from either.

Bag concept was better but the wp was too forced.

V/ slay for being a bit more complete albeit not too heavy a hit.

Both really good.. bags has a real nice concept here with the wordplay however I think slay followed through with also a great concept scheme. I think I like slyerrs flip just a tad more

aight so bags, Im a be real with you. That bar felt like it tried a little too hard. The setup was cool but the execution felt way forced to me with "n-Slay-vermillion"/"enslaver - million" <-- that just doesn't really make sense. "enslaver millions" does but if you read it as "n slay vermillion" as in maybe saying slay him and see red then that just sounds forced. The concept was cool though and I appreciate the thought you put into.

vs

ughhh, Slayerr I haven't any of your stuff in years and tbh I hope it takes just as long before I read anything else from you. As soon as I saw "only stand" I knew it was gonna rhyme with "only fans" and I really hoped it wasn't him subscribing to yours.. then I got to the end and yup, he's subbing to your only fans. This was the most Diddy laced bar I've seen in a hot minute.

v/ Bags

Lmfao yo dude youre hilarious

Enslave a million works for me, can’t say I read it and got it first time though. It took a couple reads. Not the cleanest line unfortunately, but Bag got it