Black - Ethereality, in stages
Before the worlds collide ……
Night and day, Miss mezzaluna overlapping Her relatives
golden crescent half-cousins, Solaris' spastic development
dramatic, intelligent, red hair, flaring fiery as dusk,
Evil archangel God's children secretly lust ..
a media plug that even rumors & conspiracies trust -
so when she died, all of humankind was equally crushed.
the peaceful, the lush, soft grass, imagine it's vibrance,
where only babbling brooks could break a natural silence.
static eruption, brainstem buzzing, practically mindless
The beaten path of a pathogen programming its' virus,
projected demon - white plaster walls & holograms of Osiris
Phantom in a Peacoat, staged theatric disguises,
waterfall rock-walls, moss-coated, scattering cypress
robotic arms, solar charged automatic devices;
hands outstretched in a bow, tipped top-hats to your Highness
it's all downhill once a pattern arises..
if magic is priceless, physics fall into poverty,
cuz hope & prayer are the dominating modern commodities,
mysteries, unanswered crimes, such obvious oddities
like documenting laws to govern art or philosophy
balance primal id, instinctive ties, & hostile monogamy
constructing sandcastle properties for blossoming colonies,
divine apotheosis, known apostles of Socrates
Visible to the naked eye but not in photography.
a solid anomaly to spice the moment, stuck in this madness
purgatorial plateau between His dungeon and palace,
scales go bloody red when measuring our functional status,
it only takes a single shift to suddenly vanish -
there's another world around us, hidden under the magnets
where all emotional reactions trigger colorful flashes,
spectral seas, tsunami waves, a stunning abstraction
Chinese new year celebration in the lungs of a dragon ..
Voluptuous passions, shadowboxing candle reflections,
using liquor as a trojan horse to battle depression.
live every moment for it's imperfections, casual tension
and the adolescent pleasure of a vaginal entrance.
past or the present? take a sec to answer the question,
then summarize your reason in one accurate sentence.
evidence is clear - the human, sadness-dependent,
using history as a crutch to mask a lack of progression.
molasses black apparitions, Hades' shadowy henchmen
evaluate our mental state through telepathic assessments ;
reality's destined .. Etherealness is a practiced emergence
to transcend atomic bonding at it's tangible surface -
there's no man behind the curtain, no infallible purpose,
though we're not alone .. trust me, i'm a rational person.
gas matter resurges, transparent window locked from inside,
we've been dead since the minute we were oxygenized.
there's a faraway kingdom where apocalypse thrives,
promoting dollar beer specials & a positive vibe ..
Minds fry at early ages, but their bodies survive
it's never been so strangely clear ..
we've gotta collide.
- Black
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Too epic. On my phone now but best believe I'm hitting this with some extensive feed. As for now, settle with: you Put the ether in ethereal
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what makes your work so great is simply the vividness you display through your choice of wording. some of the thoughts you portray are so nicely detailed its like the next best thing to actually standing in your vision or holding a picture of it...
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dramatic, intelligent, red hair, flaring fiery as dusk,
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the peaceful, the lush, soft grass, imagine it's vibrance,
where only babbling brooks could break a natural silence
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waterfall rock-walls, moss-coated, scattering cypress
robotic arms, solar charged automatic devices;
i mean. . . . i can pluck quotes from your verses all day. Lines like these are nothing short of brilliant.
This is really the backbone to your story telling. There is so much living inside this verse that it almost reads like a screen play. Simply masterful man.
the flow as always was on point. Everything reads smooth. . ive read it twice so far, and honestly, its just a very impressionable verse. And i promise, if you get ALL your links up this time. . i will nom this hahaha
if you get time, id love to see your take on this. .
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...498/index.html
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